Sunday, August 5, 2012

Stopping Laundry Folding on a Rainy Afternoon (parody of Robert Frost's Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening)

Whose sock this is I think I know.
Its mate has a hole worn through the toe;
He will not see me stop folding here
To carry his sock to trashbin and throw.


My little girl must think it strange
To stop without a pile arranged.
Between the t-shirts and underwear
The rainiest afternoon of the year.


She gives her teething rattle a shake
To ask if there's some mistake.
The only other sound's the sweep
Of dryer cycle and Downy sheet.


The laundry is warm, white and deep,
But I have multitasks to keep,
And socks to fold before I sleep,
And socks to fold before I sleep.


Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening
By Robert Frost

Whose woods these are I think I know.
His house is in the village, though;
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.

My little horse must think it queer
To stop without a farmhouse near
Between the woods and frozen lake
The darkest evening of the year.


He gives his harness bells a shake
To ask if there's some mistake.
The only other sound's the sweep
Of easy wind and downy flake.


The woods are lovely, dark and deep,
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.

17 comments:

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    1. Thanks, friend. It was fun writing it. :)

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  2. I've always loved the original, and your version was gorgeous.

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    1. So kind of you to say that, Christina. Robert Frost is one of my favorites. Thank you for visiting! Xx

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  3. You are so creative! I love it. I teach this poem to my English 2 class. I may have to steal yours when I talk about parody, if that's okay with you.

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  4. Ha! I'd love that, Heather. Randy didn't want me to tell anybody, but he helped with the first line. ;)

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  5. Loved your take on Robert Frost's poem. Adorable and very true...I loved the lines,
    "And socks to fold before I sleep,
    And socks to fold before I sleep."
    Those suckers are always turning up when you least expect them :)
    Thanks for sharing.
    Have a great day,
    Tamara

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    1. Hey, Tamara! Nice to see you here!

      And, yes, those suckers are always turning up when you least expect them and disappeared when you expect them to be there. Especially when they are little bitty baby socks! :)

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  6. LOL. Very creative and funny. It looks like this too a lot of work to write!

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    1. Thanks, E.B. It was a fun exercise to do! My husband helped me, but being modest he just didn't want any credit.

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  7. Jolina, that is my ultimate favorite poem. I love what your rewrite of it! So perfect. My favorite line that I use all the time is, "And miles to go before I sleep."

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    1. One of my favorite lines, too, Leah. He was such a talented writer.

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